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Offline oldmangreg

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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2260 on: September 14, 2010, 06:56:07 PM »
The secondary Hull seems a little big to go with the rest of the ship. Didn't the Excelsior have some sort of cargo/shuttle bay at the tip with a door on each side?
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2261 on: September 14, 2010, 06:59:09 PM »
damn...she's beautiful!
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2262 on: September 14, 2010, 10:36:48 PM »
Looks like I'm going to like the new design even better than the original which I had been working with just last night.  I would say it does look like a larger saucer would easily fit on that secondary hull.  Also I'd agree the "flat top" on the impulse housing does look a bit out of place, but my estimate was you just hadn't finished it.  It's already looking to be shaping up into a Great looking ship.
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2263 on: September 14, 2010, 10:54:51 PM »
Quote from: oldmangreg on September 14, 2010, 06:56:07 PM
The secondary Hull seems a little big to go with the rest of the ship. Didn't the Excelsior have some sort of cargo/shuttle bay at the tip with a door on each side?

This is where I have to disagree with you...I personally think the sec hull looks just fine with the saucer and the rest of the ship!

And the cargo/shuttle bay was on the bottom of the secondary hull right at the curved "cutout"
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2264 on: September 15, 2010, 04:15:57 AM »
this look great , i can't even imagine a Galaxy made in this style by buzz

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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2265 on: September 15, 2010, 08:18:48 AM »
Nacelles are just for proportion and will be replaced/ jj-fied.

I have brought the back of the neck forward but ran out of time to work on the impulse engine.
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2266 on: September 15, 2010, 08:55:48 AM »
In the sideview, that platform at the aft looks a bit odd. But i guess you are going to change that anyway. Maybe a shuttlebay landing platform? as intrepid-class has?
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2267 on: September 15, 2010, 10:08:29 AM »
hmm...mabey incorporate a bit of the nacelle design you used on the JJ Excel 1.0?
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2268 on: September 15, 2010, 11:11:02 AM »
I'm liking it but at the moment i think its looking too much like the original. Maybe moving the neck forwardsabit and adding a curved kind of spine. I've quickly drawn out what i mean .

Otherwise its brill keep it up  :yay:
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2269 on: September 15, 2010, 11:15:03 AM »
IMHO, she could use bit longer nacelles.. those look undersized for Excelsior.. just IMHO.  :doh:
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2270 on: September 15, 2010, 12:57:01 PM »
I agree. The rest of the ship looks pretty good though :)
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2271 on: September 15, 2010, 01:44:14 PM »
You could always try something along the lines of this: (credit Jetfreak on deviantart)
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2272 on: September 15, 2010, 01:47:05 PM »
Quote from: Lionus on September 15, 2010, 11:15:03 AM
IMHO, she could use bit longer nacelles.. those look undersized for Excelsior.. just IMHO.  :doh:

Quote from: baz1701 on September 15, 2010, 08:18:48 AM
Nacelles are just for proportion and will be replaced/ jj-fied.
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2273 on: September 15, 2010, 01:48:47 PM »
Thanks beat me too it lol have a cookie Dalek.
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2274 on: September 15, 2010, 01:56:55 PM »
http://bc-central.net/forums/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=5769.0;attach=48516;image
ok wanting to see this JJexcelsior ingame, this could be a fun ship to use XD
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2275 on: September 15, 2010, 02:11:22 PM »
Just to make it clear I'm making my own design. I have my own ideas for the ship and don't really like following others concepts.

Sorry for the rant but I'm not dropping what I have started to make someone else ship.
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2276 on: September 15, 2010, 02:20:02 PM »
Quote from: baz1701 on September 15, 2010, 02:11:22 PM
Just to make it clear I'm making my own design. I have my own ideas for the ship and don't really like following others concepts.

Sorry for the rant but I'm not dropping what I have started to make someone else ship.

Are suggestions like my last one still welcome?
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2277 on: September 15, 2010, 02:25:55 PM »
Edd I do like your neck suggestion and may use it.  :)
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2278 on: September 15, 2010, 02:57:30 PM »
baz i meant like a seperate release thats not included in the pack or whatever...... :facepalm: :facepalm:
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Re: Baz1701 WIP's
« Reply #2279 on: September 15, 2010, 03:03:59 PM »
One minor suggestion I'd throw out there, bulk up those nacelles. The JJverse seems to have simplified things for the audience, such as oversizing and having a lot of moving parts on the engines so that the audience clearly knows what they are.
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