I agree with that, the original design had certain aspect of myself in it (if you know what i mean) and while your concept design is good, it seems to be lacking some parts that would look good there for instance the original nacells and the smoothed sharpness of the saucer area, and i did say take some artistic liscence with the side and fore views but i would like it to closely resemble my original dorsal sketch if possible ok farshot, this is mainly so i can look at the ship a feel like im one with it and myself and also so other people who use the ship can understand what was going through my mind when i first put her down on paper if you get what im saying, im not trying to completely dismiss your concept, because it is very professional, but id like to see a sizeable reference to the original material i gave you ok?
EDIT: also when it comes time to hardpoint this ship, its gotta be one of those ships that can go in guns blazing and withstand a fair bit of abuse k?