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Title: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: GMunoz on December 16, 2012, 07:58:02 PM
Comments and suggestions appreciated.

(http://imageshack.us/a/img13/4097/champlain001.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img259/1614/champlain002.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img12/6080/champlain003.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img820/8485/champlain004.jpg)
(http://imageshack.us/a/img202/7426/champlain005.jpg)
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: Phoenix Bondi on December 16, 2012, 09:19:35 PM
Ah man, did they let the newbie in the construction yard? lol he was ment to build a kelvin, lol

jk man, its wicked, can't wait to add it to my tos fleet im building :D thanks man
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: moed on December 16, 2012, 10:56:23 PM
Great ship Gustavo!

I think the secondary hull is a bit too small... but still awesome stuff dude.
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: FarShot on December 17, 2012, 02:38:17 AM
Warp grille on the left, registry on the right?...
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: mckinneyc on December 17, 2012, 06:02:23 AM
I would have the grill on both sides then the pendant and reg running down the top of the nacelle

She looks great mind you!
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: moed on December 17, 2012, 12:47:44 PM
I would have the grill on both sides then the pendant and reg running down the top of the nacelle

She looks great mind you!

Or maybe the grill on the bottom and pendants on both sides?
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: mckinneyc on December 17, 2012, 03:18:11 PM
Or maybe the grill on the bottom and pendants on both sides?

Or no blue grill bit at all and have a shorter pendant and reg on both sides?
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: CyAn1d3 on December 17, 2012, 09:04:58 PM
or maybe:

WELCOME BACK GUS   :P

and i like the grille... but i see everyones complaint on it... i like the idea of it being on top with pennants on both sides  :angel

otherwise she looks great dude!  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: GMunoz on December 18, 2012, 12:12:44 AM
Thanks for the comments and suggestions guys. And for the Welcome CyAn1d3.

I decided to go with the grill on top and banners on both sides of the nacelle. I'll post updta pics shortly.

Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: GMunoz on December 19, 2012, 05:57:40 AM
Here is the updated nacelle:

(http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8021/newnacelle.jpg)
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: baz1701 on December 19, 2012, 08:43:00 AM
Now that is the best take on a solo TOS nacelle I have ever seen. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: mckinneyc on December 19, 2012, 11:43:56 AM
Much better. She looks great  :yay:
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: Vortex on December 19, 2012, 11:52:06 AM
Very cool.
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: moed on December 19, 2012, 12:18:37 PM
Excellent!

But... I still think the secondary hull looks a bit too "stumpy"   ;)
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: GMunoz on December 19, 2012, 03:32:54 PM
Thanks guys.

moed,  actually I lengthened the secondary hull from the original design, where the shuttle bay came almost flush with the bottom trailing edge of the neck pylon.  Don't really want to lengthen it any further as the ship will look like an upside down Kelvin.
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: moed on December 19, 2012, 03:42:46 PM
Thanks guys.

moed,  actually I lengthened the secondary hull from the original design, where the shuttle bay came almost flush with the bottom trailing edge of the neck pylon.  Don't really want to lengthen it any further as the ship will look like an upside down Kelvin.

No worries dude.  It's just a very minor thing.  And you've done an awesome job on it.

Cheers!
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: captain_obvious on December 19, 2012, 04:22:41 PM
Hmm, then what about shifting the entire secondary back wards, so that the neck meets the secondary slightly closer to the deflector?  It might help make it look a tad longer without having to lengthen it.
I'm with moed tbh, it does look too stumpy to me in it's current form. 
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: CyAn1d3 on December 19, 2012, 10:09:13 PM
Hmm, then what about shifting the entire secondary back wards, so that the neck meets the secondary slightly closer to the deflector?  It might help make it look a tad longer without having to lengthen it.
I'm with moed tbh, it does look too stumpy to me in it's current form. 

Short. SHORT range cruiser  :dontcare:
Title: Re: TOS Light Cruiser - USS Champlain
Post by: captain_obvious on December 21, 2012, 07:30:12 AM
Short. SHORT range cruiser  :dontcare:

I tell you what it reminds me of, this (http://memory-beta.wikia.com/wiki/USS_Marco_Polo_%28NCC-7219%29) little tub.