Ok this may be harsh for you but there is almost everything wrong if you ask me (unless you are trying to make it as canon as possible) so here are some good tips for you :
1) remove these LCARS and make new ones cuz in endgame they are different shapes more bowed etc etc etc.
2) change LCARS color scheme to more violet/pink/maroon with teal/lime green accents
3) (personal opinion) remove green/teal from the bridge, it reminds me of dentists room
4) change that red to something more lets say ... subtle maybe beige or light blue (tho they are over used
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some reference pic of colors scheme
after this adjustments you should get very interesting bridge