It is too ordinary. We need something with looking similar to the Ent F + saucer between sovereign and the prommie, very long (1.5km) and a bit narrow (500-600m) with short height (100-150m). Somekind of a small number of phasers, and torpedoes, but with many types of weapons. Phasers, Pulses, unique Quantums + pulse modified unique quantums. It MUST be something unique!
And not making it a god ship. The ship should be believable.
Instead of beginning with drawing a full fledged ship, start with the basics. Think about how the Enterprise-E was in initial concept form. Start drawing flowing aerodynamic lines and your ship components should form from those lines. Draw a few different views to fully visualize your design. Then refine your shapes and create cleaner ship components- saucer, engineering hull, pylons, and nacelles.
In addition, think about the era and role you want your ship to be in (TMP, TNG, DS9, VOY, Post-Nem, Misc Future) (Explorer, Fighter, etc)
These will affect your ship design greatly. If possible, try to introduce some elements reminiscent of existing ship designs (don't copy exact components- make them unique for your ship).
Just some advice when coming up with an unique ship.