For a second, I thought something bad might have happened to him!
It was a pity his "Bridge Commander" TV-style series fell out of production - that was great!
As for your video -
It has potential, but I really don't like the music. Too frenetic and loud for a Trek production.
There are a few natural heirs to Dante's throne around here - you could get some tips from them on camera positioning and such. First tip is to turn off subtitles while you're filming actions scenes. People like Cordanilus and RifleMan80.