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Offline andyp

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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #400 on: May 21, 2013, 03:23:50 PM »
not sure if its just my monitor but the red strips appear more orange than red
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #401 on: May 21, 2013, 03:26:08 PM »
Sorry about the crash, ehh  that always sucks, but it still coming along very nicely :bow:
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #402 on: May 21, 2013, 04:06:53 PM »
Quote from: andyp on May 21, 2013, 03:23:50 PM
not sure if its just my monitor but the red strips appear more orange than red

lol thats cause the red lines were beneath a layer that was slightly transparent... fixed now :)

also which is better first or second? (i know its subtle)


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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #403 on: May 21, 2013, 07:22:59 PM »
well here we are... still more to do but need you guys to let me now if its still ok and that ive not mucked it up yet lol




and a little experiment.... too much i think???
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #404 on: May 22, 2013, 02:35:32 AM »
Too much in that last one. You may want to alter the font. Also, don't forget that it should be 'S.S.'.

Overall, looking good.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #405 on: May 22, 2013, 04:20:19 AM »
Agree with vortex, to much contrast to the base hull colour.

If you make it a closer shade to the rest of the hull it may work.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #406 on: May 22, 2013, 07:05:32 AM »
Quote from: Vortex on May 22, 2013, 02:35:32 AM
Too much in that last one. You may want to alter the font. Also, don't forget that it should be 'S.S.'.

Overall, looking good.

thank you... what font should it be then? also it IS "SS" though i did think about doing "HMS Mason" :D

Quote from: baz1701 on May 22, 2013, 04:20:19 AM
Agree with vortex, to much contrast to the base hull colour.

If you make it a closer shade to the rest of the hull it may work.

understood... was going for a "...the new ships of Starfleet have experimental warp stress hull coatings on some of the leading edges of the ship..." but was just a thought lol...

note: this is the "S.S Mason" NX 266. Starfleet Scout Vessel. My hope is that when this is finished i can proceed with the:

"S.S Mason" NX 266 - Refit version.
"U.S.S Mason" NCC 26610 - X-era Version
"U.S.S Mason" NCC 26610 - A - TNG era
"U.S.S Mason" NCC 954266 - PostDW
"U.S.S Mason" NCC 95426610 - Future Version
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #407 on: May 22, 2013, 08:27:20 AM »
I was just trying to point out that you were missing the periods after each 'S'. Look for a TOS font. Either Baz, Wiley or Phoenix could point you the right way for that.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #408 on: May 22, 2013, 08:29:38 AM »
ok dude thanks :)
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« Reply #409 on: May 22, 2013, 04:19:03 PM »
for now im keeping it grey lol

here is an in game shot... speculars are on annd obviously you will see it needs work lol

also done the pylons and nacelles

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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #410 on: May 22, 2013, 05:49:06 PM »
i think ive got my first specular sorted :)

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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #411 on: May 23, 2013, 11:14:21 AM »
new font for the ship :)



(fixed period)
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #412 on: May 23, 2013, 11:15:41 AM »
That's looking much better! Not sure about those bussards, they seem a little 'off' somehow.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #413 on: May 23, 2013, 11:23:00 AM »
and you missed the second period. But looks much better then what i haver right now. The bussards looked better than before.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #414 on: May 23, 2013, 04:20:02 PM »
sorted the period.

whats up with the bussards? too bright or did you not mean in the in game shot?
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #415 on: May 23, 2013, 07:27:58 PM »
Lookin' good!

I think the bussard texture is too "uniform", needs to be toned down a little and more random.  Also, I would change the orange-ish color to a deeper red.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #416 on: May 24, 2013, 10:14:12 AM »
new updates





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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #417 on: May 24, 2013, 10:55:40 AM »
I have to say Hobbs she is looking mighty fine.
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #418 on: May 24, 2013, 11:09:10 AM »
Quote from: Killallewoks on May 24, 2013, 10:55:40 AM
I have to say Hobbs she is looking mighty fine.

thanks dude :D

its the silly little things... a weld here a re smooth there and it makes it so much better... and im like "why the hell haven't i been doing it like this from the beginning?!"

just a few more bits (ventral area basically)
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Re: Hobbs's WIP
« Reply #419 on: May 24, 2013, 12:20:02 PM »
Too much red for my liking, a medium orange/red might work. Similar with impulse engines, a little too deep in colour (May be lack of glows.). Overall, she's looking great.
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