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Sovie/Saber Crossover
« on: December 31, 2010, 02:27:13 PM »
Hi All

Here is my first ship i've created the last few days. It's mix between intrepid, NX and Nova. It wil be a bit smaller the Intrepid Class.
What do yu think?


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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #1 on: December 31, 2010, 02:51:03 PM »
For 1st, not bad, Im sure some of the fine modders we got around will chime in. And share some tips
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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2010, 04:06:07 PM »
hmm...something different.

I bet a lot of those tips will involve modifying the nacelles, and smoothing up the saucer (looks like the plan version (top down) needs rounded off).
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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #3 on: December 31, 2010, 04:49:38 PM »
This needs some more Fat, the Side.jpg pic looks to skinny.

And Congrats on the Model, it's better than what ever i can make.

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #4 on: December 31, 2010, 05:18:13 PM »
Yeah i know. But stil have to add a shuttlebay

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #5 on: December 31, 2010, 05:56:26 PM »
Good luck with that.

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #6 on: December 31, 2010, 06:00:05 PM »
Thanks. Oh and happy new year.

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #7 on: January 01, 2011, 09:40:54 AM »
OK update-time:


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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #8 on: January 01, 2011, 09:42:15 AM »
forgot one:



What do you think? Any tipps?

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #9 on: January 01, 2011, 11:28:03 AM »
I would add an engineering section under the nacelles because the aft section looks way too thin to me. One good torp hit and BOOM! But that's just me. Looks really good for a first.
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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #10 on: January 01, 2011, 05:37:17 PM »
Are you going for Enterprise Era ship here, or sleek 25th Century?

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #11 on: January 01, 2011, 05:52:05 PM »
More for the end of 24th or beginning of the 25th. But nx-era wouldn't sound bad. Maybe reverse-engineered?

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #12 on: January 01, 2011, 06:56:44 PM »
Maybe 2 variants, one from the Ent Era and one Post Nem Era..

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #13 on: January 01, 2011, 08:25:54 PM »
Maybe 2 variants, one from the Ent Era and one Post Nem Era..

Sounds good to me Vedic, would also make a good quad engine design too.



I think it looks great for a first time too.

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #14 on: January 01, 2011, 08:30:40 PM »
forgot one:



What do you think? Any tipps?
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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #15 on: January 01, 2011, 08:31:55 PM »
Something I noticed,,may be the angle. Looks like it is off a bit.


Also think it would look better to fatten it up underneath. Just some ideas/suggestions.  :)

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #16 on: January 02, 2011, 07:09:07 AM »
ok fatten up what do you think now?


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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #17 on: January 02, 2011, 07:20:36 AM »
She looks bigger but not by much, just a little more fatter and i would say you have it on the dot, granted its your model, so you have creative freedom to make it how ever you want.

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #18 on: January 02, 2011, 08:20:12 AM »
OK, i think i ceep it like that (for the aft part)

and something for quad-lover

any other suggestions to the model or any class names?

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Re: My first WIP
« Reply #19 on: January 02, 2011, 09:45:11 AM »
The quad gets my vote.  :D
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