Author Topic: WIP - Tokyo class(Original TOS)[Final Model Tweaking] (Read 7366 times)

GRUNT · « **on:** November 16, 2008, 09:58:42 PM »

Introduction
After seeing the XI trailer i was inspired by the Kelvin to do this design. Well, i found a design and modeled it, really.
I needed some time away from the Edward, it was...aggravating me.

P.s. Shout out to markyd for the neck tutorial.
Comments/Concerns?

Nebula · « **Reply #1 on:** November 16, 2008, 10:32:44 PM »

ahh nice model

cordanilus · « **Reply #2 on:** November 16, 2008, 10:54:51 PM »

Good looking ship. Can't think of anything to improve her. Well done.

GRUNT · « **Reply #3 on:** November 17, 2008, 12:05:20 AM »

Smoothed Mesh. 8)

MarkyD · « **Reply #4 on:** November 17, 2008, 04:10:18 AM »

very nice work mate. looks clean and well built

moed · « **Reply #5 on:** November 17, 2008, 03:10:33 PM »

Very clean model.

Great work!

Technerd89 · « **Reply #6 on:** November 17, 2008, 03:14:49 PM »

maybe its just me, but in screenshot 04 in your first post, the nacelle seems a little dis-proportionate to the rest of the ship. other than that, nice design and good looking model

GRUNT · « **Reply #7 on:** November 17, 2008, 10:18:19 PM »

Quote from: Technerd89 on November 17, 2008, 03:14:49 PM

maybe its just me, but in screenshot 04 in your first post, the nacelle seems a little dis-proportionate to the rest of the ship. other than that, nice design and good looking model

I have been told that, ill see what i can do.

ACES_HIGH · « **Reply #8 on:** November 17, 2008, 11:51:55 PM »

yeah it is a bit off, I think part of it is from the shadow on that render, but even if you remove the black for better contrast, the saucer still looks a bit small compared to the nacelle. I know you're not trying to make one, but I've attached the Diagram of the Saladin from the SFTM to show how that looks so you get a better Idea of the ideal proportions

GRUNT · « **Reply #9 on:** November 18, 2008, 08:02:03 PM »

Update...the nacelle mesh modified, texture made to look singular...

C/C welcome!

Ps is it me, or is the arrowhead pointing slightly down?

Aeries · « **Reply #10 on:** November 18, 2008, 09:13:46 PM »

Nice work, I'm impressed. :]

Bigkap · « **Reply #11 on:** November 18, 2008, 10:28:17 PM »

As said above very clean model. Looks great!

Adonis · « **Reply #12 on:** November 19, 2008, 07:59:50 PM »

Poly Count?

MarkyD · « **Reply #13 on:** November 20, 2008, 01:54:37 PM »

If memory serves your red stripe on the necelle needs to be flipped as its upside down mate...

Looks good so far ;)

Dalek · « **Reply #14 on:** November 20, 2008, 04:28:40 PM »

:O. Woah, I cannot believe that I did not look at this thread before. The ship is beautiful! And done in 14 posts! Even I couldn't do that.

GRUNT · « **Reply #15 on:** November 20, 2008, 06:06:23 PM »

Quote from: Adonis on November 19, 2008, 07:59:50 PM

Poly Count?

10.5k, not including the 'blinkers'

tiqhud · « **Reply #16 on:** November 21, 2008, 08:38:21 AM »

looks, really good, could be Similar to the Saladin Class in armament.

GRUNT · « **Reply #17 on:** November 22, 2008, 02:49:21 PM »

Thanks for the comments/suggestions...much help. Ty!

Update: Everything texture mapped except neck and deflector housing.

Textures: Based on Moonraker's

C/C?

Aeries · « **Reply #18 on:** November 22, 2008, 02:54:44 PM »

A bit blurry on the renders, I've noticed. Otherwise it looks awesome. :]

GRUNT · « **Reply #19 on:** November 22, 2008, 02:58:03 PM »

Quote from: Aeries on November 22, 2008, 02:54:44 PM

A bit blurry on the renders, I've noticed. Otherwise it looks awesome. :]

Must be a Max render setting...off to investigate!

Edit: It maybe Motion Blur/or me saving to jpg. lol.

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Author Topic: WIP - Tokyo class(Original TOS)[Final Model Tweaking] (Read 7366 times)