well i like what you've done, especially the modelled in escape pods (i may do the same on my ships but indent them

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i think the issue you have with the panneling / aztecing? is that its simply quite different to standard starfleet style. iff you look at earlier ships like the ent-1701A to the galaxy and nebula's then you will see that the style they show is more.... symmetrical and also less of an unusual shape for the panels.
what i mean is they are standard shapes like squares and rectangles not trapezoids or quadrilateral shapes.
in general your panels look ok to me but i would say that i have only a couple of preferences:
1) i prefer the symmetrical style.
2) i prefer the lighter colouring of the 1701A and D not the grey scale that seems to be on most ships now.
conclusion
i like your styling, and the only "something" i can see is that its very different to original ships but it seems like the correct way to go after the soverign class and her sister classes such as the norway, steamrunner and others.
(make her bluey-white and i'll lover her lol)