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Offline DJ Curtis

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U.S.S. Excelsior NCC-2000-A
« on: October 30, 2010, 03:23:51 PM »
So I got the modeling bug last night and have been working on this.  I know I've go three other ships in the pipe, but hey, why not?  It's been a while since I've done anything.  I kinda got sucked into STO for a while, but am taking a break.  Not sure what this is exactly yet, some sort of upper mid level cruiser.  As I've been building it, it's showing signs of Galaxy, Sovereign, Prometheus, and maybe a touch of love too.  :P

Anyhow, pics.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #1 on: October 30, 2010, 03:32:02 PM »
Hey, cool. I hope you go with deflector bands for this, insted of a dish :thumbsup:
 


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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #2 on: October 30, 2010, 04:19:37 PM »
The back seems very disproportionate to the front.  If you don't want to lengthen it, then give it some bigger girth and beefier pylons.

Otherwise, Ryan approves. :thumbsup:

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #3 on: October 30, 2010, 04:57:08 PM »
as it is now, I'm seeing the same kind of "flat" nacelles that went on the Australia.  i also have a feeling you've just created the Enterprise F.
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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #4 on: October 30, 2010, 05:02:45 PM »
Already did that ship, KCS.  ;)

As for being disproportionate in the rear, I actually did beef up the pylons right after posting.  Also, the underside is fairly heavy, so as it stands I think it's working on it.  Once I've the secondary hull fleshed out I'll post more pics.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #5 on: October 30, 2010, 05:42:55 PM »
If suggestions are allowed..

Bartholdi-class, USS Belfort, NCC-91871

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #6 on: October 30, 2010, 06:35:51 PM »
The Lion of Belfort is Bartholdi's masterpiece, along with the Statue of Liberty.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #7 on: October 30, 2010, 06:58:18 PM »
Already did that ship, KCS.  ;)

I had to go look that up.  the last Century I Dled was the Picard...it sucked :P  someone must have changed stuff around.  besides, I keep forgetting I have the Soulwolf class enterprise F
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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #8 on: October 30, 2010, 07:30:14 PM »
DJ so glad to see you modding again. I love your ships!!! The TNG cruiser was awesome. Why not make this a link between the Galaxy and Sovie? The aft of the saucer looks like a mix of both

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #9 on: October 30, 2010, 07:45:00 PM »
Ha. Should had known that it was too easy. *cookie*
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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #10 on: October 30, 2010, 08:44:07 PM »
That looks amazing DJ!
Your designs are always so expertly conceived and implemented.  :) 

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #11 on: October 30, 2010, 08:46:31 PM »
On a completely unrelated note that should not be elaborated on in this thread any further:  (:P)

-Have you put any thought into rebuilding the Century class?  Not re-imagining, but just making a v2.0.  I'm sure over the years you've picked up some new tricks of the trade and could build a cleaner and more beautiful rendition.  Even CG found ways to improve on his Sovereign.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #12 on: October 30, 2010, 10:52:55 PM »
Here are the latest pics.  Don't be too hard on the rear end of the ship, it needs significant refinement still.

Farshot-->  The thought has crossed my mind before.  Though when it really became serious, I made a list of things I would want to do, and the result was the Eclipse Class.  With that in mind, the Ent F is a pretty solid mesh.  Not as good as what I can do now, but still pretty good.  I'm ont planning on redoing it any time soon.  Plus my style and method of texturing is much different now. I'd have a hard time staying true to the original.

Kitkat--> Thanks.  Just kind of flows.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #13 on: October 30, 2010, 11:27:26 PM »
Nifty

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #14 on: October 31, 2010, 12:27:28 AM »
I refined the back end.  Still want to put details in, but or the moment, the basic shape is there.  in the previous version, the nacelles sloped upward at the base.  I could resolve that along the bottom, so I added a bit more to the dorsal section of the engineer hull by the shuttlebay and then level off he pylon bases.  I rebuilt them entirely, but used the basic shape of the old ones.

*edit*  I also refined the engineering hull around the under the saucer.  I made it more traditional and less bulbous.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #15 on: October 31, 2010, 12:52:13 AM »
as always looking good
great to have u back
there are great starship designs and there is crap

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #16 on: October 31, 2010, 02:41:26 AM »
Thanks, though I never really went anywhere.  I was checking in all summer almost every day, just not posting much.  I was posting in the STO thread...

-added some detail to the underside of the saucer.
-finished reworking the aft end of the ship.
-widened the nacelle pylons.
-added bridge area.

I particularly like the last render.  As far as positions for beauty shots go, that's a common one, and it looks good from that angle, I think.

That's it for tonight.  :dance

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #17 on: October 31, 2010, 04:07:57 AM »
That's almost a Sovereign MkII Refit.. And there's no shame in using the Google, DJ.  :D
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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #18 on: October 31, 2010, 06:14:49 AM »
I like how you have added cloaking devices to the nacelles, should make it harder to lock on to them so you can still escape. :p

Really though, she looks great in those latest shots.

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Re: Cruiser
« Reply #19 on: October 31, 2010, 07:43:54 AM »
Very nice design indeed.