Author Topic: Baz1701 WIP's - Semi retired. (Read 450598 times)

oldmangreg · « **Reply #2260 on:** September 14, 2010, 06:56:07 PM »

The secondary Hull seems a little big to go with the rest of the ship. Didn't the Excelsior have some sort of cargo/shuttle bay at the tip with a door on each side?

DMWalsh79 · « **Reply #2261 on:** September 14, 2010, 06:59:09 PM »

damn...she's beautiful!

markeno · « **Reply #2262 on:** September 14, 2010, 10:36:48 PM »

Looks like I'm going to like the new design even better than the original which I had been working with just last night. I would say it does look like a larger saucer would easily fit on that secondary hull. Also I'd agree the "flat top" on the impulse housing does look a bit out of place, but my estimate was you just hadn't finished it. It's already looking to be shaping up into a Great looking ship.

eclipse74569 · « **Reply #2263 on:** September 14, 2010, 10:54:51 PM »

Quote from: oldmangreg on September 14, 2010, 06:56:07 PM

The secondary Hull seems a little big to go with the rest of the ship. Didn't the Excelsior have some sort of cargo/shuttle bay at the tip with a door on each side?

This is where I have to disagree with you...I personally think the sec hull looks just fine with the saucer and the rest of the ship!

And the cargo/shuttle bay was on the bottom of the secondary hull right at the curved "cutout"

webxro · « **Reply #2264 on:** September 15, 2010, 04:15:57 AM »

this look great , i can't even imagine a Galaxy made in this style by buzz

NOT A REQUEST

baz1701 · « **Reply #2265 on:** September 15, 2010, 08:18:48 AM »

Nacelles are just for proportion and will be replaced/ jj-fied.

I have brought the back of the neck forward but ran out of time to work on the impulse engine.

007bashir · « **Reply #2266 on:** September 15, 2010, 08:55:48 AM »

In the sideview, that platform at the aft looks a bit odd. But i guess you are going to change that anyway. Maybe a shuttlebay landing platform? as intrepid-class has?

King Class Scout · « **Reply #2267 on:** September 15, 2010, 10:08:29 AM »

hmm...mabey incorporate a bit of the nacelle design you used on the JJ Excel 1.0?

EDD_7 · « **Reply #2268 on:** September 15, 2010, 11:11:02 AM »

I'm liking it but at the moment i think its looking too much like the original. Maybe moving the neck forwardsabit and adding a curved kind of spine. I've quickly drawn out what i mean .

Otherwise its brill keep it up

Lionus · « **Reply #2269 on:** September 15, 2010, 11:15:03 AM »

IMHO, she could use bit longer nacelles.. those look undersized for Excelsior.. just IMHO.

Toa_Kaita · « **Reply #2270 on:** September 15, 2010, 12:57:01 PM »

I agree. The rest of the ship looks pretty good though

oldmangreg · « **Reply #2271 on:** September 15, 2010, 01:44:14 PM »

You could always try something along the lines of this: (credit Jetfreak on deviantart)

Dalek · « **Reply #2272 on:** September 15, 2010, 01:47:05 PM »

Quote from: Lionus on September 15, 2010, 11:15:03 AM

IMHO, she could use bit longer nacelles.. those look undersized for Excelsior.. just IMHO.

Quote from: baz1701 on September 15, 2010, 08:18:48 AM

Nacelles are just for proportion and will be replaced/ jj-fied.

baz1701 · « **Reply #2273 on:** September 15, 2010, 01:48:47 PM »

Thanks beat me too it lol have a cookie Dalek.

flarespire · « **Reply #2274 on:** September 15, 2010, 01:56:55 PM »

http://bc-central.net/forums/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=5769.0;attach=48516;image
ok wanting to see this JJexcelsior ingame, this could be a fun ship to use XD

baz1701 · « **Reply #2275 on:** September 15, 2010, 02:11:22 PM »

Just to make it clear I'm making my own design. I have my own ideas for the ship and don't really like following others concepts.

Sorry for the rant but I'm not dropping what I have started to make someone else ship.

EDD_7 · « **Reply #2276 on:** September 15, 2010, 02:20:02 PM »

Quote from: baz1701 on September 15, 2010, 02:11:22 PM

Just to make it clear I'm making my own design. I have my own ideas for the ship and don't really like following others concepts.

Sorry for the rant but I'm not dropping what I have started to make someone else ship.

Are suggestions like my last one still welcome?

baz1701 · « **Reply #2277 on:** September 15, 2010, 02:25:55 PM »

Edd I do like your neck suggestion and may use it.

flarespire · « **Reply #2278 on:** September 15, 2010, 02:57:30 PM »

baz i meant like a seperate release thats not included in the pack or whatever......

Johnnymuffintop · « **Reply #2279 on:** September 15, 2010, 03:03:59 PM »

One minor suggestion I'd throw out there, bulk up those nacelles. The JJverse seems to have simplified things for the audience, such as oversizing and having a lot of moving parts on the engines so that the audience clearly knows what they are.

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