You asked for it. 
no offense, but it could use some work, maybe it would benefit from a larger design.
While these pieces fit together well from a kitbash standpoint, it doesn't look like it would work well from a technical standpoint. The Impulse engines looks too small for it to have much maneuverability or acceleration at high sublight, and, although the larger warp engine might provide better speed, the single in-line nacelle would restrict lateral maneuverability at warp to almost zero. The stub wings might provide marginal lift in an atmosphere, which means it might have slightly more maneuverability than a standard Type-9 in an aerial dogfight, but it would probably be out maneuvered by something like the Peregrine, which has a larger wing area. And unless you can hang ordinance from those wings, they wouldn't have much use in space. Also, where are the weapons? I can see what looks like 2 medium and 2 small pulse phaser cannons, this is very lightly armed for a fighter, the aforementioned Peregrine has 8 heavy phaser canons, at least 5 micro-photon tubes and several phaser beam arrays
Well i'm a graphic designer student (second year) so don't get harsh on my skills (after the last year i'm pure gonna study 3d stuff).
Btw no offense taken, i wanted some advice. But let me correct a few things though...
Bigger impulse units don't mean always faster! Have a look at voyager. Her impulse units were actually ridiculous small and even for the defiant. And these are ships from 344 to 120/170/200 meters big(got to love cg). Perhaps i can make a few adjustments to show off something else (f16style).
The warp engine, well i think you are a bit technical over this i mean, there were lots of people saying about three engine warpnacelle or even four, but it works. I mean this is a fan stuff, it isn't gonna fly for real.
The wings, well we saw shuttles or other ships doing some cool flying stuff and we saw the peregrine too but actually to be honest, she didn't impress me (not even close).
Look at alice, or some other alien fighters.
Weapons, these are still being placed but i have four phaser strips(can shoot front and aft) for the moment, two torpedo launchers(front), and two pulse canons (on the wing).
She has perhaps less but that doesn't mean she packs less punch. I mean it is a new ship, the peregrine is damn old and there is a limit. This new ship has shields and some armor, so she can take a few hits before getting destroyed. We saw the peregrine in action (wasn't impressed) and they were shot down like flies. What are your weapons gonna do at this?
Consider the peregrine fighter as the raptor of bsg and this fighter as the viper.
Yes the peregrine can carry more guns and is bigger but the razor is way faster and has new sensors (working on the details) so better targeting or scanning.
@vedic,
no hud, just oldskool style with a joystick (like insurrection). And no she isn't big, that's the point.
