Author Topic: Baz1701 WIP's - Semi retired. (Read 488488 times)

Aeries · « **Reply #220 on:** July 10, 2009, 02:12:35 PM »

Here ya go... :]

baz1701 · « **Reply #221 on:** July 10, 2009, 02:39:38 PM »

May not be so sunken but they are there

Dalek · « **Reply #222 on:** July 10, 2009, 02:41:11 PM »

I think your nacelles need to be more obvious there are 2 sections. The connector to the pylon and the main warp nacelles. That deep bit looks like its part of the main nacelle which it isn't.

Aeries · « **Reply #223 on:** July 10, 2009, 02:49:07 PM »

Quote from: baz1701 on July 10, 2009, 02:39:38 PM

May not be so sunken but they are there

OHHH that's what it was! Okay, sorry, my mistake then. xD

086gf · « **Reply #224 on:** July 10, 2009, 02:57:46 PM »

The very top dome of the bridge structure is way to high it needs to be much more subtle.

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hmm...A JJ excelsior? I'm looking forward to this

And all you got to do to see it is go back to the tenth page. Weily was working on one too IIRC.

baz1701 · « **Reply #225 on:** July 10, 2009, 03:26:41 PM »

The "joining line" will textured on.

The bridge dome is too big, my lunch break had ended before I had it right.

Johnnymuffintop · « **Reply #226 on:** July 10, 2009, 04:43:13 PM »

And chance of a JJPrise and Connie refit kitbash?

baz1701 · « **Reply #227 on:** July 10, 2009, 04:44:59 PM »

I think that project needs more that a kit bash

Billz · « **Reply #228 on:** July 10, 2009, 05:04:18 PM »

Will you making the nacelle fins like they are in that screenshot from the movie?

baz1701 · « **Reply #229 on:** July 10, 2009, 05:06:34 PM »

I have been playing with the mark 3 to do the effect using the warp warm up scrip and change the textures to simulate the fins opening and the bussard and end caps glowing.

Still a work in progress but it is getting there

Shadowknight1 · « **Reply #230 on:** July 10, 2009, 07:28:02 PM »

The ventral aft area of the engineering hull is a bit too blocky and the nacelle end needs to be sunken in with a half-spherical dome in the center, sort of like the TOS 1701's engines. And since you already know about the bridge dome, I can't think of anything else wrong. ^_^

Billz · « **Reply #231 on:** July 10, 2009, 07:43:21 PM »

Those nacelles are too long.

baz1701 · « **Reply #232 on:** July 11, 2009, 09:36:20 AM »

Quote from: Shadowknight1 on July 10, 2009, 07:28:02 PM

The ventral aft area of the engineering hull is a bit too blocky and the nacelle end needs to be sunken in with a half-spherical dome in the center, sort of like the TOS 1701's engines. And since you already know about the bridge dome,

Not 100% happy with the engineering hull, it is next to be reviewes. and I have already fixed the bridge dome. I will also be looking at the nacelle end caps as well.

Quote from: Billz on July 10, 2009, 07:43:21 PM

Those nacelles are too long.

They are the right length for my refernece images. I think the lack of bulk in the engineering hull is over scaling the nacelles.

baz1701 · « **Reply #233 on:** July 11, 2009, 11:42:43 AM »

oK, totally rebuilt the enginering hull, I'm much more happy with it not.

The trouble it the dorsal and pylons need reworking to align the to the hull.

DJ Curtis · « **Reply #234 on:** July 11, 2009, 11:51:44 AM »

much improved, though you've got an error in the undercut. looks like some double edges from offset verts.

baz1701 · « **Reply #235 on:** July 11, 2009, 11:54:36 AM »

Quote from: DJ Curtis on July 11, 2009, 11:51:44 AM

much improved, though you've got an error in the undercut. looks like some double edges from offset verts.

could you translate that in to a laymans terms for, still learning the terms. perhaps circle a pic withe the error?

Shadowknight1 · « **Reply #236 on:** July 11, 2009, 03:53:21 PM »

Ehhh...you have to remember baz, the ventral section of the secondary hull has no flat surface besides the inner section of the cut-out. Also, the warp engine pylons are sortof attached to the secondary hull like the Ent-D's pylons, with the trailing edge of the pylon coming into the lower shuttlebay rim. Remember your references. ;)

baz1701 · « **Reply #237 on:** July 14, 2009, 08:16:27 AM »

Have worked on the bottom of the engineering hull and the nacelle end caps

Kirk · « **Reply #238 on:** July 14, 2009, 09:09:59 AM »

You keep getting better.

+krama

CyAn1d3 · « **Reply #239 on:** July 14, 2009, 02:10:29 PM »

yesindeedy lookin gooood

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